Walking across the misty fog mason stumbled upon the frosty grass as I saw a key. “what is this mason” asked himself. this key was golden with diamonds on it. I wonder what this could do he thought, Although he lived at a castle and there were heaps of doors locked. I think i'm going to try to open a door. mason was at this last door hoping that there that this key would be any good. Click the door slammed open as he stopped and stared at a pile of treasures. What could I do with this mason thought.


Hey Rocky,
ReplyDeleteI'm deffinately interested in finding out what Mason did with that treasure. Watch out for punctuation and capitols, the speach marks should only cover what Mason says - not Masons name aswell.
Awesome work, Keep writing :) Mr. Hutchings