Thursday, November 24, 2011


Avoiding athletics I was commanded to get on that field I thought that I would let my team down. My heart was pounding as Pt England school lined in their age groups. Awaiting for Mr Burt to begin the day of fun. I hoped I could get lots of points for my team.

Our favourite event was softball throw, chucking my hardest I almost got past one of the furthest throws. (Dam I did not do very well, better luck next time) I said to my self I heard a sound it was time for lunch. We had not finished our last event after that we run to our last event sadly the day had to a end but we had a lot fun. Well it was worth it.

Friday, November 18, 2011

Rocky and Jabez Day and Night

8 sentences

Stupid King Kong knowingly embarrassed himself.

Knowingly king Kong was stupid enough to embarrassed himself. enough to embarrass.

Embarrassing king Kong's mother the man felt guilty.

Stupid king Kong knowingly embarrassed his family.

The creepy slugs attempted to jump unfortunately they fell down quickly.

Unfortunately the creepy slugs attempted to cross the road.

Attempting to pull of a job the creepy slugs unfortnatly they were caught.

The creppy slugs attempted to jog unfortunately they could not.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

One Tree Hill

“Slide slide” I said sliding slowly down. Running into the crater I instantly fell on a stone. Tumbling like crazy I screamed out loud, nearly slipping. I was devastated. I couldn't control myself. Would you like to fall on the ground leaving bruises? I sobbed like a baby wahhhhh.

Friday, November 4, 2011

Ice Cream Comets

Filled with joy and excitement, room 13 made Ice cream comets in our bay. “Yummy” I said. As most kids had a wild excitement they were crazy and demanding for more. I knew this was going to be a big treat.

Eagerly awaiting for the delectable treat one of the teachers poured Ice cream on our hand.
Mixing it with biscuits and sprinkles it turned out good. As our stomachs were impatient we begged to eat it. We rolled it like play dough. It began to melt on my fingers.

As whaea Janille put a cone on top we scoped up the ice cream on our cones we slurped.
sweet ice cream dripped in my hand as it created a large mess. It made my stomach sore.
Crunch crunch I heard as some of our class devoured it.

What a afternoon to enjoy It left me begging for more.That was yummy and I wish that we could do it again.