Showing posts with label Writing term 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing term 4. Show all posts

Friday, February 3, 2012

All about me


Hi, my name is Rocky! My hobbies are playing outside, especially playing with my long board. My other favorite hobbie is playing PS3. The best ps3 game I have ever played is NRL 2010. The person I look up to is my Dad because he always helps me. My favourite tv program is Franklin.

I live near Pt England school so I have to walk to school. This year I'm in Room 16. My close friends are Jabez, Shayne, Isaia, Wyatt and Levi. My favorite subject in school is reading. My worst subject is writing.

Willy the wizard is my best story I have ever read before. In the future I would love to travel around the world one day. The best movie that I like is Captain America because he turns into a muscular man and becomes a hero.

Thanks for reading my and hope you give me feedback.






Monday, December 5, 2011

50 Word Story


The queen lost her key she suddenly tumbled over with tears running away. She then found Fat foot on her farm ,mysteriously trying to run. He had the key. “Oh no” she said in distress. Eagerly the queen raced to Fat foot. Fat foot tripped up crying for his mum.

Thursday, November 24, 2011

Athletics


Avoiding athletics I was commanded to get on that field I thought that I would let my team down. My heart was pounding as Pt England school lined in their age groups. Awaiting for Mr Burt to begin the day of fun. I hoped I could get lots of points for my team.


Our favourite event was softball throw, chucking my hardest I almost got past one of the furthest throws. (Dam I did not do very well, better luck next time) I said to my self I heard a sound it was time for lunch. We had not finished our last event after that we run to our last event sadly the day had to a end but we had a lot fun. Well it was worth it.

Friday, November 4, 2011

Ice Cream Comets



Filled with joy and excitement, room 13 made Ice cream comets in our bay. “Yummy” I said. As most kids had a wild excitement they were crazy and demanding for more. I knew this was going to be a big treat.

Eagerly awaiting for the delectable treat one of the teachers poured Ice cream on our hand.
Mixing it with biscuits and sprinkles it turned out good. As our stomachs were impatient we begged to eat it. We rolled it like play dough. It began to melt on my fingers.

As whaea Janille put a cone on top we scoped up the ice cream on our cones we slurped.
sweet ice cream dripped in my hand as it created a large mess. It made my stomach sore.
Crunch crunch I heard as some of our class devoured it.

What a afternoon to enjoy It left me begging for more.That was yummy and I wish that we could do it again.